changed my double page spread

Heres my new double page spread, i have decided the Rhianna page can be the first page when you open the magazine as it has a little bit of information, this new double page i think is better as it has more information for people who don't really know JLS and they can hear how they shot to fame and what they have achieved. I think i have done well choosing the images and i wrote everything myself that is in this article.